Revision Plan

As I revise my essay, the goal for my revision process is to backup all of my arguments with facts and/or quotes.  This will make my paper more credible and more likely for it to persuade someone towards the importance of art.  I can also correct all of the comments that my classmates made on my rough draft.  The most common thing that I got was that I needed to add quotes to back up my claims.

I will do this by revisiting my paper and underlining any claims that I make with red marker.  I will also underline the evidence that I should be providing to support my claims in blue marker.  If I see a claim that isn’t followed by evidence, I will correct it.  This will make it so that my paper is more credible.  

My biggest challenge will be finding enough evidence to support all of my all of my claims, however having strong claims backed up by factual evidence is important enough for me to have to find a way around this.

If I am having trouble finding enough evidence to back up my claims I will have to use credible outside sources.  Having the visual of two different colored markers will help because it will provide a visual for me to look at and determine where I need more evidence.